For the last few days I have been working on my quick wright could powerless. We could choose if we wanted to do paragraphs or no paragraphs.
The things we had to highlight were Aaawwubbis, interrupters, short sharp sentence, starting with ly and an em dash.
Powerless
As I sneak round the corner, I see a, sleeping, body, I slowly creep in trying not to drop any pixie dust until I get to the robot. As I reach my way to the robot I slip and my pixie dust flies everywhere. “What will I do” the fairy mutters to herself.
The inventor wakes up and sees a hole lot of toys running out of the old wooden house. SLAM. The door got shut. WOOF. A hole gust of wind blows in the inventors face. The inventor stops and takes in a big breath in and out.
The inventor is thinking are the toys evil are the toys nice or are the toys mean who knows let’s go out of my old wooden house and have a look……..
“STOP” the inventor says……… My bon-fire has been lit. The inventor runs in-side and gets a big jug of water. BOOM. Goes the door as the inventor runs out with his big jug of water.
“What are you going to do about it” the evil creatures said.
The inventor ignored them and just kept pouring water out of the
jug onto the bon-fire. The fire is finally out.
Suddenly, the inventor sees a big flash of light coming from the soft hard toys. “They are no longer alive” the inventor says to himself. The inventor thinks what a relief that they are gone.
As I slowly walk inside, I look back and all I see is darkness- spooky scary, burnt logs and grass. I turn back around and carry on walking. I get to in my house and shut the door. I think to myself I better get some sleep. I have got a big day tomorrow.
